I'm really enjoying the story so far. I love how circumstances caused Jim to invite Spock to his home and how Spock's secret feelings for Jim meant he jumped at the chance. I'm glad now, that with Winona being there and all the years of family history between them, that Spock will be a stabilising element for Jim, and perhaps for Winona too.
It was cute how Spock was exploring all the natural elements around the farm, and his admission that he, too, had spent some time on a Vulcan farm. I love the way you just threw that in there about the 'common Vulcan', because all the ones we meet through the stories are really quite uncommon by comparison. So that was a nice touch.
I'm also enjoying the switch of POV, as we gain insight into the same situation as seen from the different characters. And I'm enjoying your characteriations very much!
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It was cute how Spock was exploring all the natural elements around the farm, and his admission that he, too, had spent some time on a Vulcan farm. I love the way you just threw that in there about the 'common Vulcan', because all the ones we meet through the stories are really quite uncommon by comparison. So that was a nice touch.
I'm also enjoying the switch of POV, as we gain insight into the same situation as seen from the different characters. And I'm enjoying your characteriations very much!
On to Chapter 2....!!
This is going to be a late night...! :-)