Thank you so much for letting me know the character dynamics felt realistic to you. The dialogues were the first thing to come to me, but I wrote them so far back in time - literally about 2 months ago - and then there was a huge gap during which I did nothing, except sit on those scraps of dialogues written in a notebook by hand.

When I finally started writing the narration around them, I wasn't sure if they even worked anymore.

So, yeah, thanks. :)