you have talent on loan from God...and you KNOW how to smoothly construct a story and build real life into and around your characters...this is where the story gets so could I CAN NOT PUT IT DOWN...I'm reading it online and that's something I never, ever do, I usually print online stories out so I can curl up in my favorite chair with a piping hot mug of cocoa, but I am so rooted into this story and all of its fabulously created tension and complexity (without which, imho, no K/S story is worth even reading, I like my K/S MATURE) that I cannot turn away...on to Part 3, and yes you do seem to like 'em nice and long...another feature I absolutely enjoy and demand! :)