oh my gosh you captured the emotions here perfectly. I was horrified at Frank. The very vivid description of his abuse of Jim was perfect. I can only imagine it must be very very difficult to come back to this house. I don't think I could do that, actually. I wouldn't be able to face the ghosts. I'm glad Jim's got Spock with him.

I can really feel the winter tone of this. I really like this.

I also love the characterizations here: Kirk, Spock, Winona. All perfect.
Really great chapter!