ext_47453 ([identity profile] beathen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] laylafic 2007-04-11 02:14 am (UTC)

I noticed a few typos that probably need to be looked at...

Hence, this major task done, Craig had headed off towards home, leaving Ted to discuss more Kinnetik business with Brian and dropping off Michael off store.

I think you meant to say Carl instead of Craig.

So it was no wonder Henry Stanford, who was a staunch homophone

homophobe

P.S. Feel free to delete this comment if you wish.

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