I really like the way you set this up, with the contrasting perception from Spock, Jim, and Winona's point of views. Just looking through Spock and Jim's eyes, Winona really does seem like she dislikes her son and is disappointed in him. But the end gives of some sense of her actual feelings...
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Date: 2010-12-09 06:52 pm (UTC)I look forward to reading the rest. ^^