Date: 2010-12-10 12:44 am (UTC)
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Oh, this was a painful chapter to read. So many strong emotions, so many unresolved tensions between mother and son. Clearly the issues are very deep-seated and aren't going to magically disappear. And Spock, so stoically standing up for his friend.

Interesting that Winona picked up on Spock's feelings. She's given him advice, the question is will he act on it.

I'm enjoying your writing - you're doing the dynamics between the three of them really well. It all feels very realistic.

And now, even if Jim wants to leave, he can't. They're snowed in.

On to the next chapter...

It's 12:45...I knew this was going to be a late night...
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