This was a wonderful read. Yes, I loved everyone actually talking with Brian but Justin. I adored, smart, sneaky, loving Justin. BUT Mother Taylor rocks. I love how she goes from taking care of a tast for Justin to making sure Brian is well fed. CRACKS me up. Where does Brian think Justin got his stalking and determination skills from.....Mother Taylor.
One element that came through for me was that Brian's trip to Ibiza was slightly surreal bordering on a bad dream until he got there, and then seeing Justin everywhere, but not quite finding him until the timing was absolutely right.....nicely drawn.
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timeasmymeasure
Lovely read
Date: 2006-11-18 04:21 pm (UTC)One element that came through for me was that Brian's trip to Ibiza was slightly surreal bordering on a bad dream until he got there, and then seeing Justin everywhere, but not quite finding him until the timing was absolutely right.....nicely drawn.