laylafic

I must tell you how absoluetely thrilled your feedback made me. I love it when people tell me what works for them in a story, and what doesn't work. I am so glad you've enjoyed this so far and how the POV switches worked for you. Thank you very much. And I took your "I am" and "I will" versus "I'm" and "I'll" advise and made the corrections in the main document. Probably the reason I fall prey to this issue is because English isn't my native tongue, but it helps when someone points out these things to me. Well, my would-be beta also pointed it out (since this story isn't yet betaed but will be when its finally finished)... but I really appreciate your comments.

THANKS!

Oh, and the long-awaited new chapter is up. :)